There Was A Young Man Named Nile

There was a young man named Nile
Who kept a crocodile.
Nile vanished last December
O how well I remember
The smile of that crocodile …

Advertisements

2 thoughts on “There Was A Young Man Named Nile

  1. Andrew Green

    These are good but could be improved with more attention to the rhythm e.g.

    There was a young man called Nile
    Whose pet was a crocodile
    He vanished December
    How well we remember
    The smile of the crocodile.

    Reply

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.